(A short story)
~Tapas Sarkar
All of a sudden, Pritam
heard a feeble voice from a few meters of distance behind “Ai babu…ai babu....”
The voice was too soft to recognize in the crowd, but he felt it could be him
the man is calling to, so, he turned his head and noticed a flimsy old man
indicating towards him with his shaking right palm “Ai babu suno sunoooo, iss
tadaf…iss tadaf dekho.”
Two or three travelers
crossed their way and it was difficult to recognize the old man for Pritam,
he somehow managed and stopped amid the platform with his heavy luggage. Within
that time, the crowd was passing and crossing his way drastically form front
and back, but he had stayed standing till the old man came near to him and
exclaimed with a thoughtful voice “Beta you’re wrong, but you’ll get it as soon
as you finish your midnight sleep.” Pritam astonished and remained
speechless for a moment.
The statement puzzled him
roughly. He asked the old man in reply “Uncle, aap kya keh rhe ho, mai samajh nhi
pa rha.” The old man again told him “Samaj jaoge beta…bs kuch din baki hai.”
Now, Pritam became
more stone like. He wished to catch the old man and ask him abundant questions.
But, in a quick, between them both, pressing the crowd, a coolie entered with a
huge luggage on his back. He could not move forward because the crowd was too
hazard, and Pritam too took up his trolly-bag’s handle in his hand so
that it would remain with him. After sometime, when, the coolie took aside, Pritam
looked on the back side where the old man was standing. But, shockingly, he
found nothing. The old man was gone. Among the many unknown faces of the crowd Pritam
searched time and again for the old man to the different directions. He could
not find him anymore. He was really gone. Soon, Pritam felt that he was
extremely sweating inside and he was very much tired, it might be because of
his high blood pressure. So, he decided to sit somewhere on any slab of the
station platform. Taking his trolly-bag, now he headed towards a slab.
Unfortunately, there was no empty seat. So, he took his trolly-bag to another
one. There he found an empty seat and sit on that in hurry. He was feeling
relaxed under a big ceiling fan though the fan was producing hardly any amount
of cold air. But, the important thing was that he was satisfied. He opened the
neck button of his shirt and leaned his head on the back side of the stone
slab. He, soon, started feeling drowsy and sleepy. Though, he opened his eyes
twice or thrice and remembered for a moment of the old man’s mysterious
appearance and disappearance, he was too tired to keep his eyes opened. Reason
to stay awake was less important to his physical system as he already started
feeling acute weakness. He focused on thinking in brain slowly and found that
the old man kept hunting him, in the mind, in his dream.
Amid the noisy station, in
his dream Pritam was now real and present. A well-dressed dude man. After
collecting his ticket from the counter, he ran towards the train which had
whistled its last whistle. He managed hardly to get inside the general coach as
his ticket was for the second class only. An empty seat he discovered where an
old man was sitting earlier to its next. He sit on the empty seat keeping his
bags aside. He sighed a long breath. From his forehead few drops of sweat was
falling to the chin. Quickly, he wiped his face off with a perfumed hanky. It
smeled costly. The other nearby passengers looked at him and Pritam took
an opportunity to show him off. He took out his most costly iPhone from his
pocket, and in glossy and fluent English, he started speaking on phone-
“Hey babe, I’m done….”
“Yeah yeah, I kept her
there…yes, everything, they will take care…why not we paid them for that.”
“No, she was crying,
yes…yes I said, see ma you have to stay here for now, I cannot take you to
home.”
“No, I did not give her
the phone…ok, I’ll bring that, okay, bye…LV U….”
All most, all the
passengers, in the coach, were busy with their own activities. Some dude middle
aged men were sunk in their half folded newspapers as if they heard nothing. Some
home coming village laborers kept staring at Pritam speechless listening
to his sophisticated different language. A group of young men and women were busy
taking their selfies totally being indifferent. Few of them secretly got
inspired by that dude man’s English accent. Only the old man who was sitting next
of him, was hearing Pritam from the beginning to the end. Pritam noticed
that and he thought that the old man was illiterate, so, he ignored. But, the
old man started reciting some lines-
“Kitne Khauf hota hai
raat ke andheron mein,
Jake puchho un parindo se
jinke ghar nahi hote.”
“Kitni ajeeb hai nekiyon
ki justuju Ghalib,
Namaz bhi jaldi mein
parhte hain phir se gunah karne ke liye.”
A vendor entered the
coach and started shaking his ‘muri’ mixture making utensils with husky luring
noises “Chena Chena, Chena chaiye, fresh chena…Chena Chena, fresh chena….” Pritam
was shocked already. He was disturbed by both the old man and the vendor. He
felt that he was supposed to hear the last lines of the old man, but he could
not hear the last two lines as the vendor’s cry became louder and louder “Chena
Chena, Chena chaiye, fresh chena…Chena Chena, fresh chena….”
Pritam started
scolding the vendor and finally forced him to leave his personal space as he
thought it was his right right to speak against his inconveniences as he had
done to his mother for his own desire, pleasure, and thrust to enjoy life. His
flat had no empty room to live with his mother. He turned to the old man to ask
a question what was actually he had meant by the last lines he recited. But, he
was vanished from that place right there. The old man was gone. Pritam
searched here and there inside the coach, he could not find the old man anymore.
He looked outside the window. Suddenly, at an unknown station the train
stopped. He looked outside the window again, he, spontaneously, reminisced that
it was the same railway station he had visited previously, but, hardly could
remember when. It was the same old man he had encountered somewhere earlier at
the same station. He noticed that the same rag clothed weak old man was walking
slowly on the platform with his muttering lips voicing some vague lines. Pritam
did not understand what was going on, he cried loudly “Ai…ai…ai….” But, nobody
heard him. He tried to go out to the platform to meet that old man and ask him
what had happened to him. He could not move fast. He wanted to come out of the
coach, but, he was too weak to walk to the coach gate. He became unstable and fell
down on the floor. On the other hand, in blur vision, he saw the train had
already started running and then it was running fast and fast. He rapidly
failed to recognize the fast passing by world outside.
In the station, again, a
train whistled its last whistle. Pritam discovered he was dreaming. He
hurried to take off, now his dream was gone. Yet, hardly, he was able to lift
his head which was leaned on the slab. Again, he tried, but no, his head was
too heavy. He tried to open his destitute poor closing eyes. He tried and
failed again and again. With his half open eyes, he saw some blur movements.
Those were the travelers Pritam identified. He realized that he could
not hear any sound anymore. He tried to take out his most expensive iPhone for
a call to his wife, but, soon he knew that his entire body was paralyzed. He
cried “Help, help, help….” Nobody came, nobody helped. Pritam lost his
eyesight completely now. No sense he felt from his five senses once he was
boisterous of. Only, a bit of memory, he contained now that he left his mama
somewhere. Pritam heard his mama calling him from the ‘briddhyashram’
(old age home). He confessed to his mother. He tried to open his dull eyes for
the last time, but outside it was already sun down and filled with darkness. He
cried in loud silent “Ma…ma…ma….” Nobody heard. As opposed to his cry the other
passengers on the platform were noisier in waiting for their scheduled trains
to reach to their own destinations, and then, soon, the night came.